This is the storyboard for my project, Alex will be doing the storyboard
Here is out rough sketch of the storyboard which was done together as a group. This would later on be developed into a more detailed storyboard by Alex. We originally intended to use a fake cigarette, but the school would most likely not approve of that, and so we replaced the cigarette with a sandwich, this ensures that everyone, including Mr Nick, would not get in trouble. But to be fair, cigarettes are way cooler. The rough sketch is important to give us a rough image of what we're trying to go for.
Detailed Sketch:
Since no one in my group could draw, this is the best we can come up with.
We plan to add more shots when filming since we don't have enough space to draw
Reflection
Alex did a pretty good job, unfortunately some scenes were not allowed, so we had to replace them with a more appropriate scene. Overall, I am confident that I can bring this storyboard to live, perhaps make it even better.
This was my first time creating a screenplay, Sagara assisted me a little which I am thankful for. This was really enjoyable even with my very limited imagination, I still managed to finish it before due date. It has many flaws which I am aware of, however, I tried to make it as clean looking as possible and follow the screenplay format as close as possible. Prior to making the screenplay, I learned about the rules and format of a screenplay, and examples of a good screenplay from Youtube. I also used chatGPT to help check my screenplay just to make sure everything is where it's supposed to be. Unfortunately we were not allowed to use swear words, which limits the potential of what this screenplay is truly capable of. Ben is supposed to be Victor, we made a small mistake.
Panji comes in with a motorcycle and parks and he leans to the handlebars and reminisces about past traumas and actions he committed during his time spent being in a teenage gang.
Advantages of location:
Very often empty and thus will be easier to shoot due to less distractions, as well as less likely to break ethical considerations when it comes to being shown on camera. The vibe and aesthetic of the location is also really nice and fits the theme and time of our movie well.
Disadvantages of Location:
Close to a big road so the sounds of vehicles could become a disturbance and make it harder to edit the video afterwards. We might get kicked out of the location due to not being allowed to record on private property.
Alternatives:
Johnny Rockets?
Risk Assessment
Risk:
Who is at risk:
How to avoid risk:
High, Medium, Low risk:
Getting runover by a car
Actors and cameraman
Avoid areas with large amounts of cars and vehicle activity
High
Panji falling off bike
Actor
Ensure that the kickstand is down. Park bike in safe and stable location and manner
Low
Getting kicked out of area
Everyone in the group
Ask for permission from restaurant employees. Shoot scene quickly
Low
Location
Address:
Jl. Padang Galak No.3, Kesiman, Kec. Denpasar Tim., Kota Denpasar, Bali
Scene:
Remainder of the opening, gang beating up a random person (enemy/rival gang?, robbing a person?), this is the scene where the regret sets in on the main character, and the final straw was when he was forced to kill someone?.
Advantages of location:
The location is pretty much always empty with no visitors, this means that we’ll get the area all to ourselves and won’t be disturbed by people being around the area and them speaking, it’ll also be easier to act as we won’t be as embarrassed. The overall conditions of the location and how it is poorly maintained fits in with the mise-en-scene that we are going for, and could fit for the aesthetic we’re going for.
Disadvantages of Location:
The location has a lot of windows? So outdoor natural lighting will be shown, this could make it weird especially if we need to take multiple tries and scenes with the lighting and time of day being different in each of the scenes.
Alternatives:
No Foreseeable Alternatives.
Risk Assessment
Risk:
Who is at risk:
How to avoid risk:
High, Medium, Low risk:
Possessions
Everyone in the group
Pray before entering the area. Do not be disrespectful within the area. Ask for permission and greet the area.
Medium
Attacked by wild animals
Everyone in the group
Avoid areas with high amounts of animal activity. Do not agitate any wild animals we come across. Bring weapons for self defence against animals (last resort)
Medium
Injuries caused by bad infrastructure
Everyone in the group
Mind our steps and actions when shooting in the area. Observe and look for possible alternative areas within the location.
High
This was done by Sagara and Panji
Reflection
Shoutout to Sagara and Panji for doing the Location scout and risk assessment. My only contribution was that I recommended both places to them. We didn't really stress too much about finding the locations since we already have the locations in our mind even before this project.
Here is the screentest for movie opening project done in class
Reflection:
We were instructed to read a few lines off a paper in front of the classroom, which I think could be useful to assess our acting skills, however no one took it seriously, and most - including me - were shy, and so everyone did a pretty bad job.
Teenagers and adolescents (male) between the ages of 15-21.
Psychographic
People who enjoy crime/drama/thriller films. People who are outgoing and those who often speak to themselves.
How we will appeal to this target audience
The fact that our opening will almost exclusively include teenage actors could appeal to them probably since they’d relate to them. It could also relate from the fact that teenagers that view this film might also have the same issue of a desire to join gangs and commit criminal activities, this film might deter them from it or reel them in.
Main inspirations
For the type of criminal activity and behaviour the teenage criminals have, we were inspired by a bunch of side characters we run across in the game RDR 2, these were teenage boys who were alleyway robbers, they had gangs and often robbed adults and unsuspecting people.
Our inner monologue aspect of the movie was mainly inspired by the film Goodfellas, that movie had an abundance of inner monologue coming from the main character. We hope to replicate this and at least give an idea that our film will contain an inner monologue from the opening.
General Synopsis
In a civilised town, a young fella gets involved with a group of adolescent gangsters that commits criminal acts regularly, and rules a small area in the town, as the reality of living as a vermin to society, target of law and other criminals (who are probably older than them) settles in, It challenges his morality.
The storyline of the movie is about one teenage gang member reflecting and wanting to leave but can’t due to a blood oath/promise.
Characters
Teenage criminals (wannabe gangsters) perhaps 3-4 of them depending on the amount of actors we will use.
Young adult (probably)
Representations
(How will people, places, groups be portrayed in the film opening?)
We believe the main characters if our opening will be shown in a negative manner, the teenage criminals who are probably abandoned home or come from abusive and poor families will be portrayed as dirty from their clothing, face, and maybe hair, as well as rude from well being criminals, and doing criminal activities, both of which are pretty rude.
We believe we will also portray another character (an adult) in a neutral manner, We probably won’t go for someone really old, just a young adult maybe, we’ll probably display them wearing casual clothing and tall. (Gusde)
The location we’re also planning to use will be abandoned (Taman Bali Festival) so it will be dirty and uncomfortable, fitting for a teenage criminal on the run from parents or society.
Dominant Reading
(What message do you want to give to your audience)
Don’t join gangs kids… and adults maybe.
Aside from that we’d also hopefully be able to display the reason of how innocent teenagers plunge themselves into the world of crime, blinded by its facade of fame, money, power, pleasure, and other things that uneducated and discontent people who wish for an escape from their lives hope for when joining gangs. (hopefully can do this from inner monologue)
Proposed Roles
Script
Group Effort
Storyboard
Alex and Arnold
Location Scout
Panji
Risk Assessment
Panji and Sagara
Screen Test
Group Effort
Filming schedule
Group Effort
Audience research
Group Effort
Behind-the-scenes
Sagara and Alex
Editing
Arnold and Alex (possibly)
Reflection:
Statement of intent allows us to divide task among the group members, which increases efficiency and prevents confusion. We also get a better understanding of what we are supposed to do to make our project as good as possible.
This Is My Research: Industry For My Comp 1 Project.
What Genre am I working in?:
- My group has decided to go with a crime/drama genre for our project.
Do I want my film to be niche or mainstream:
- We're torn between our options, as each has its own drawbacks. Choosing mainstream could raise expectations for our media text's quality due to substantial funding, while choosing niche could limit our creative freedom by requiring us to comply to specific filmmaking styles.
- After careful consideration, I would like for my group's project to be niche, so we can express our creativity and have a special style of filming, and also due to the fact that it is impossible for us to compete with multi-million dollar mainstream company in terms of quality and budget, so choosing niche would be the wiser decision.
What company would most likely produce my media text in the real world?:
- I think company like Lionsgate Studios would likely consider producing our media text, since the company has produced multiple films with the same genre as ours such as American Psycho.
What other media text did they produce?:
- Hunger Games, Now You see me etc
Reflection
It was a tough decision for us to decide if we want our film to be niche or mainstream, however, after a long and careful consideration, we decided to go for niche since mainstream is usually associated with high budget, which we clearly do not have as a high school student.
-First of all, the movie is set from the year 1945-55, the year during which organized crime has reached its height. Crime movies commonly takes place during the course of those years as it is popularly known as the era of mobsters. Secondly, it takes place in New York City, which was known as the Capital of Organized Crime during the course of those years, which is one of the reasons why majority of mob films takes place in New York City. In this opening scene, we can see a person of little significance having a conversation with the head of the mob family "Vito Corleone" begging him to avenge his daughter who has been brutally beaten up by her boyfriend. This conversation implicitly tells the audience that the character "Vito Corleone" is a significant and a powerful character to the plot, it is also notably clear the mannerism of the two characters and the neat formal outfits of the characters in this scene conforms to the way mafia were back then. Finally the mise en scene in this scene: the slightly dim amber lighting, the props, the outfits, and the moody environment which evokes a sense of seriousness in the crime world conforms to the genre.
What Conventions Did It Subvert:
--Firstly, the movie starts off with a conversation between two characters, which builds the narrative of the film; this subverts traditional conventions of a crime genre, and instead of starting with action and conflict, the movie starts off with a wedding event which was explicitly said by the mob boss. This joyful event contrast the dark theme of the crime genre which is usually associated with violence and power.
What representations are there (places/events/people):
-Italian mob boss, Italians, wedding, office
What Technical Elements Are Used To Represent Them:
- The Italian mob boss "Vito Corleone" was portrayed as a man with composed and courteous mannerism as well as a tidy, formal, and luxurious appearance that implies that he is a rich and wealthy man. He is also portrayed as a man with power through the camera angles and the way others regard him. On the other hand the other Italian was portrayed to be a less significant character and notably a weaker character because he was desperately asking for the mob boss's help and the camera focuses more on the Godfather giving us a sense that the Godfather is a more major character. At the end of the opening scene it is explicitly stated by the "Godfather" that there is a wedding happening outside, specifically his daughter's wedding. The people in the scene can also be seen wearing a formal outfit for special events.
Finally, the location of the scene was filmed in an office, which seems to be the Godfather's office. The dimly- lit, warm, amber lighting illuminates the room, evoking a warm and comfortable feeling across the room. It also features dark wooden furniture, the walls are filled with elegant decorations and family pictures, the gradient in the room is a perfect blend of amber tones and rich shadows which creates a mysterious atmosphere, this office embodies the powerful and authoritative nature of the Godfather aka Vito Corleone.
Taxi Driver (1976)
Produced by: Bill/Phillips Productions Italo-Judeo Productions
Distributed by: Columbia Pictures
Genre/Subgenre:
-Crime/Noir/Drama/Thriller
What Conventions Did It Conform To:
- The movie is set in the year 1976, a lonely, alienated protagonist, Travis Bickle, can be observed driving around the gritty urban New York City, establishing the setting of the film. The portrayal of the nightlife in New York City shows the danger, vulgar, and grim nature of New York, often associated with places in crime films. The film uses inner dialogue, giving us a vocal narration of the protagonist to create more depth to the story and establish motivation, which helps develops the character. The inner dialogue also gives us hints that the protagonist is slowly having a mental breakdown with all his dark and violent thoughts, which makes the audience contemplate whether or not the protagonist would turn these violent thoughts to violent tendencies further into the film, and these are common character trait of the protagonist or antagonist in a crime film.
What Conventions Did It Subvert:
- First of all, the movie begins with our protagonist "Travis Bickle", who is depicted as a lonely, disturbed veteran instead of a charismatic criminal. This challenges the typical portrayal of protagonist in a crime film who are often depicted as ruthless, charismatic and ambitious. Secondly, the opening scene mainly focuses on internal conflict, rather than jumping into immediate conflict and dramatic action- packed sequence, it focuses on building an atmosphere and exploring the city, focusing on Travis's character and the problems he is facing internally. The opening scene also did not give us a clear idea of his character morals, making it hard for us to classify whether he is a villain or a hero. Finally, rather than glorifying crime or making it look normal, the opening scene evokes a sense of dread and unease, and how grim society is, which is expressed by Travis Bickle in the opening scene when he said, "all the animals come out at night", implying the people are like animals, it also highlights the darker aspect of the city, which is unlike the typical depiction of crime in crime films.
What representations are there (places/events/people):
- Travis Bickle (protagonist), city dwellers, New York City, Driving at night
What Technical Elements Are Used To Represent Them:
- The use of low-angle shots of Travis conveys his vulnerability and isolation. The camera follows the protagonist perspective, making the viewer see the city through his eyes. We also get close-ups of his face that captures his inner conflict allowing us to see what he is feeling. The high contrast between the bright neon lights and the dark shadows of the city creates a moody atmosphere that highlights the city's danger. The pacing was also rather slow which allows us to absorb the city's atmosphere. The city dwellers through the eyes of Travis Bickle is portrayed as animals, this reflects the nature of his character and his thoughts towards the people which emphasizes how disconnected he is from society. The moody jazz used in the film adds some emotion weight to the scene and also creates tension as the protagonist drive around the city. We also get to hear ambient sounds like car honking, chatters, the couple talking in the cab, while the protagonist is silent. We can however, hear his inner monologue, giving us further insights on his thoughts about the city, which could represent his isolation from his environment and further exaggerate his feeling of loneliness. As he drives at night in his cab, it is as if we are there in the cab with him, because the set designs of the gritty environment and his confined taxi space, it feels as though we are the one driving.
Here are some other texts I will look at a little broadly to see how they appeal to audiences and how they can inspire me.
Title: Goodfellas
Year: 1990
Target Audience And How Are They Appealed To:
- I would assume that the target audience for this movie is mainly young males and males above the age of 18, as it contains masculine themes like power, and loyalty, which resonates amongst young males. The movie also contains fast-paced action and catchy dialogues which could appeal to most young males as they are more likely to be interested in these type of films. It also includes violent and mature scenes which would not be suited for younger audiences. People who enjoy crime films would also be appealed to by this film, as it is portrays the crime world very well and shows the typical life of a mobster.
What Would You Like To Use In Your Opening From This:
- My team and I would like to include an inner monologue which was also used in Goodfellas to build exposition for our opening scene. We would also want to replicate some of the dramatic action sequence from this film and the way they build tension in the opening scene. Also, we would love to use catchy and quotable dialogues in our films, which Goodfellas has a lot. We also plan to use formal clothing for our characters, similar to the suits they wore in this film. Lastly, we would like to include compilations of the mafia life and action similar to Goodfellas.
What Would You Like To Avoid In Your Opening From This:
- I think my team would like to avoid the setting which was set in the city, and would rather film our scene in a more secluded and darker area such as the inside of a house, inside a car, and even an underground or abandoned area. Secondly, instead of having a slow narrative opening scene, we would rather start our opening scene with a short inner monologue similar to Goodfellas, then showcasing a dramatic crime action packed sequence with music in the background.
Title: Donnie Brasco
Year: 1997
Target Audience And How Are They Appealed To:
- The film is targeted towards adult audiences, desirably people over the age of 21, due to its mature themes such as violence and other explicit scenes, therefore it may not be suited for audiences under the age of 21 or 18. It is also focused more towards storytelling and narration rather than simple action, which would demotivate younger audiences to watch this film, and appeal more to older audiences. It could also be targeted towards crime movie lovers, particularly those who enjoy movies like the Godfather, as this film belongs to the same genre, and has great dialogues and crime.
What Would You Like To Use In Your Opening From This:
- The scene begins with a conversation between two main characters in a bar. This is something we would like to use in our opening scene to establish the relationship of our characters. We also want our dialogue between our characters to be interesting and grabs the viewer's attention just like the scene in Donnie Brasco.
What Would You Like To Avoid In Your Opening From This:
- Instead of filming in a bar, we plan to film our scene in a diner to create a brighter and a more joyful atmosphere, which subverts the conventions of a crime genre. We would also like to have more than two characters having a conversation, and instead of it being a serious conversation, we would like to have a less serious and playful conversations and dialogue to show the warmer side of a crime family.
Title: Pulp Fiction
Year: 1995
Target Audience And How Are They Appealed To:
- This film is targeted towards young adult mainly age 18 and above, as it has an edgy theme, multiple pop culture references, and also a gritty dialogue, which could resonate with younger audiences. It is, however, may not be suited for young teens and children as it contains mature scenes and harsh language. This film could also be targeted towards crime or thriller movie lovers, as this film belongs to that genre. This film is packed with fast-paced action sequences and catchy dialogues, and crimes, which would definitely appeal to them.
What Would You Like To Use In Your Opening From This:
- We would like to film some of our opening scene in a diner that looks similar to the diner shown in Pulp Fiction. We have found a place in Bali that looks very similar to the diner in Pulp Fiction, it is a retro American diner where we will film our dialogue scenes. We would also like to use catchy dialogue trade-off between our character in the diner to grab the viewer's attention.
What Would You Like To Avoid In Your Opening From This:
- Instead of having a dialogue trade-off between two characters, we plan to have more than two characters having a conversation in a diner. We would like our diner scene to be a dialogue-heavy narrative as opposed to an immediate action.
Title: El Camino A breaking bad film
Year: 2019
https://youtu.be/elUzbYPoyFE
Target Audience And How Are They Appealed To:
- The film is targeted towards young adult, as it is unsuitable for young audiences due to featuring violence, substance, and harsh language. It is also a dark, action-packed crime film with gritty narratives, and a complex protagonist which would be appealing to most young adults. It is also targeted towards fans of the popular series, "Breaking Bad, with this being a spin-off movie of the side character in the series, the movie would certainly appeal to the die-hard fan of the show.
What Would You Like To Use In Your Opening From This:
- I would like to replicate a scene where two character is walking in the hallway as shown in the scene, which would create a dramatic and thrilling scene.
What Would You Like To Avoid In Your Opening From This:
- Rather than shooting in a hotel, we would like to shoot our hallway scene somewhere more accessible. Secondly, the scene was just two characters walking normally in the hallway, on the other hand, we would like to create a dramatic and tense scene with two characters walking in a hallway with an intention to harm someone. Lastly, the color grading used in the scene is too bright and too dull for me, which creates a boring atmosphere, so we would like to implement a darker tone in our hallway scene to build a darker atmosphere and build tension.
Title: Breaking Bad S8 E5
Year 2012
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cbbm2-Xt59g
Target Audience And How Are They Appealed To:
- The show is targeted towards adults age 18-50, as the show is full of complex characters, gritty narratives, and moral dilemmas which these age group tend to appreciate. It is also targeted towards people who enjoy a gritty crime drama show that challenge our viewpoint on certain subject like morality, and transformation.
What Would You Like To Use In Your Opening From This:
- The scene shows a series of murder edited into a compilation, with a lighthearted music playing in the background, as opposed to having a dark and serious music playing. We would like to create an opening similar to this idea, where we film the life of a criminal and a series of criminal acts with a joyful music that contrast to the grim situation happening in the scene.
What Would You Like To Avoid In Your Opening From This:
- We would prefer to film our series of crime scenes in multiple different settings, rather than filming it in one setting like the prison shown in the scene. We would also like to avoid showing graphic explicit violence as much as we can, but rather imply violence. We would also like to use a different background music,
- This film is targeted primarily towards adults who appreciates heavy and gritty dialogues, and a character-driven narrative. This movie is also targeted towards people who enjoy noir, thrilling crime films, and appreciates the dark themes and styles found in these kind of genre.
What Would You Like To Use In Your Opening From This:
- The lighting and the ambery, moody color grading is something we would like to replicate, as it helps create a noir atmosphere to further exaggerate the crime genre, and also to create tension in our scenes. We would also like to use formal, neat vests or suits for our characters, similar to the scene above.
What Would You Like To Avoid In Your Opening From This:
- We would like to avoid the slow pacing of this scene, and would prefer a faster-paced action sequence to create a blast of excitement immediately catching the viewer's attention. We would also like to avoid a dramatic dialogue trade-off between our characters, but rather use a more playful, unserious and gritty dialogues.
Here is some other videos I watched to help me in my project
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Reflection
We watched this video during one of our lessons. This video will surely help me in my movie opening project, as it gave me a better understanding on how to create a good opening scene
